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Hi Talilotu,This is a very good poem.I like how you used words like swirly wave and ocean cave.You might be a poem writer when you grow up.Where did you get all the ideas for your poem?Keep up the good work!From Shrey
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Hi Talilotu,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good poem.
I like how you used words like swirly wave and ocean cave.
You might be a poem writer when you grow up.
Where did you get all the ideas for your poem?
Keep up the good work!
From Shrey
Hi Shrey,
DeleteThank you Shrey for that good comment and I post a comment on your blog, I hope that was good enough.
Form Talilotu.